WordHue - presskit done, looking for feedback

Discussion in 'Public Game Developers Forum' started by beardysoftware, Aug 5, 2015.

  1. beardysoftware

    beardysoftware Active Member

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    Hello, I'm about to launch my first game, and was wondering if any experts out there could give some feedback on my presskit, website, and promo video?

    http://beardysoftware.com

    I've never done this promotion stuff before, so any feedback is welcome. Thanks!
     
  2. Rogue

    Rogue Well-Known Member
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    I feel like your game lends well to an animated image showing gameplay for the main page. I find showing is always better than a wall of text (I am aware you have a video but I have to look for it then play it). Other than that it is ok. I think it just needs more visual stuff as it is pretty text overwhelming. The game reminds me of Pulp Diction which was a game a few years back from the talented Muzboz (Gameplay Trailer here if you want to see how that looked)

    Anyway, I think more visual stuff would really help. Try some animated images perhaps :)
     
  3. beardysoftware

    beardysoftware Active Member

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    Thanks, that's a great idea. ... I changed the main landing page to have a nice long animated GIF showing gameplay. You are right, it's much more engaging that way!
     

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