Was a mean? If so, I did not mean to at all. I will post the whole story line that actually MEANS something on a post later. This part will be what the game is trying to be based on.
I shudder over what the grammar in your story is like. Your not being mean, just completely unreasonable. And I hope you realize no dev is going to work with you if you have this attitude ( not "my game", your story, his game).
This thread makes me laugh also-- although you may write short stories, most probably won't be material that would be put into a game. Grading for essays or stories is also based a bit on your teachers personality, likes and mood their in.
