everyone,i believe my game is good~ but there is not many rate about my game~ so,i plan to play a action~ that is --<rate our game,win dollars> now,I am preparing the relevant information~ it's Coming soon! ________________________________________________ this is the picture about this action ,i will use it in admob~ please everyone look it,is it wrong ? _________________________________________________ this is my game: Red Rum Play it,no regret !A lonely hero,a Metallic color gun,he was fighting with the forces of evil by himself!In th… $0.99 Buy Now Watch Media DetailsPlay it,no regret !A lonely hero,a Metallic color gun,he was fighting with the forces of evil by himself!In the game,you will control the hero,Adjust shooting Angle ,From all the angles ,or depand on the bullets,or depand on the power of the dynamite,to kill all the terrorists. Features:- the accurate shooting-the tricky flight track-Absolutely mental test! - subtle insight observation -the dynamic ,cool music-Timely stability update and upgrade! Information Seller: Genre:Action, Strategy Release:Feb 15, 2011 Updated:Nov 30, -0001 Version: Size:0.0 TouchArcade Rating:Unrated User Rating: (1) Your Rating:unrated Compatibility:HD Universal yanyu_studio Well-Known Member Feb 16, 2011 67 4 0 #2 yanyu_studio, Feb 18, 2011 have update,please everyone give comments New England Gamer Moderator Staff Member Patreon Silver Patreon Gold Patreon Bronze Jul 30, 2009 6,143 1 0 #3 New England Gamer, Feb 18, 2011 Let's just skip over the part that you are beginning to look rather desperate and move on to your question if the ad looks wrong - well, you spelled "rate" wrong as "rote." No one will know what to do if they see that ad except perhaps give bad reviews for spelling! You need to clean up your ad description as it is riddled with grammatical and spelling errors - spaces where there aren't supposed to be any, none where there are, run-ons, etc. And that app info there - where you can rate the game - you should let the readers rate it and refrain from giving yourself a 5 star review. yanyu_studio Well-Known Member Feb 16, 2011 67 4 0 #4 yanyu_studio, Feb 18, 2011 en ,thanks , i have do it again! it is very hard,my english is badly~ gekkota Well-Known Member Jul 17, 2008 1,489 2 38 #5 gekkota, Feb 18, 2011 Since you asked, I do have a few comments. First, I completely agree with everything New England Gamer has written. That being said, there are a few issues that would prevent me from ever trying this game. The title screen is terrible. The figure is nearly an exact copy of the logo for the "Hitman" series of video games. Obviously, you already know that...so do we, and we don't like it. Any game that steals a logo from a popular series is bound to be bad. The title of the game borrows the plot device from Stephen King's "The Shining." RedRum=Murder. It was clever when he used it, but not when others copy it. So basically, that is why I would not have an interest in your game. No matter how good it is, borrowing images and plot devices from others is a red flag that this is not a game worth trying. Good games have originality. They don't need to depend on the success of others. yanyu_studio Well-Known Member Feb 16, 2011 67 4 0 #6 yanyu_studio, Feb 18, 2011 Last edited: Feb 18, 2011 “Good games have originality.They don't need to depend on the success of others.” that right! this is a good proposed！ title screen and title of the game ，i think its very cool!so i and my team agree my proposed,the name is Red Rum!Asked "The Shining" the blessing, REDRUM word distillation of the studies has become a cultural symbol,and i am not an exception！ title screen，that is serious,we really use the screen to attract the user's purpose, although this screen has been processed in our art! look like,it's a bad idea! o,yes,we will change it Within the about five versions!（You must know,it isn't our update plan！） thank you！ (You must log in or sign up to post here.) Show Ignored Content Share This Page Tweet Your name or email address: Password: Forgot your password? Stay logged in
Let's just skip over the part that you are beginning to look rather desperate and move on to your question if the ad looks wrong - well, you spelled "rate" wrong as "rote." No one will know what to do if they see that ad except perhaps give bad reviews for spelling! You need to clean up your ad description as it is riddled with grammatical and spelling errors - spaces where there aren't supposed to be any, none where there are, run-ons, etc. And that app info there - where you can rate the game - you should let the readers rate it and refrain from giving yourself a 5 star review.
Since you asked, I do have a few comments. First, I completely agree with everything New England Gamer has written. That being said, there are a few issues that would prevent me from ever trying this game. The title screen is terrible. The figure is nearly an exact copy of the logo for the "Hitman" series of video games. Obviously, you already know that...so do we, and we don't like it. Any game that steals a logo from a popular series is bound to be bad. The title of the game borrows the plot device from Stephen King's "The Shining." RedRum=Murder. It was clever when he used it, but not when others copy it. So basically, that is why I would not have an interest in your game. No matter how good it is, borrowing images and plot devices from others is a red flag that this is not a game worth trying. Good games have originality. They don't need to depend on the success of others.
“Good games have originality.They don't need to depend on the success of others.” that right! this is a good proposed！ title screen and title of the game ，i think its very cool!so i and my team agree my proposed,the name is Red Rum!Asked "The Shining" the blessing, REDRUM word distillation of the studies has become a cultural symbol,and i am not an exception！ title screen，that is serious,we really use the screen to attract the user's purpose, although this screen has been processed in our art! look like,it's a bad idea! o,yes,we will change it Within the about five versions!（You must know,it isn't our update plan！） thank you！
