Really confusing, you don't know sometimes what to do, where to go. Some designs are cool, good thing you used 3D lines to draw. Some parts are poorly decorated/polished Sometimes you don't see well obstacles, and colors don't go togheter Overall, I think you should improve deco and tricky buggy parts of the level Nice though
If you want a featured level, it isn't just having flashy effects and lots of objects. You have to do something different, something unique. 2 mario-based levels got into the featured because they were new, unique, and well made. I think you have that well made part down, try to think of something no one has done before. Just wondering, would you be happy with just a rated level? Because The Power got rated
You might want to make it more apparent that you're supposed to go ON, not over the spikes at the beginning, unless you want a 2confusing4u demon.
The part after the monster mouths should maybe heva the same ambiance than the beginning, dark, not violet and grey The blue spring in buggy and works 1/2, i am oftenly touched by he spikes Add some deco in the ring part after the blue spring Avoid putting several same-sized saws in a row. Looks ugly The ball part, it is hard to see obstacles and it's tricky at the beginning of it The UFO, something to fix there. the monster is well done, but dunno Let me get further, even in practice it is hard
I have now seen it. It is really hard, and deco speaking, the blue light is too flashy for this kind of level for the part before the ufo, same thing, improve deco and for the second ball part, which is really hard, it is pretty decent, but really tricky buggy
I'm currently trying to decide whether I should build another level or not... I don't feel like spending so much time building, but I have so many ideas D:
And something about ship / wave / second ufo parts? I kinda want to fix everything in one update, since this level isn't exactly easy.
Yeah so the wave part, I know many people do this but it is always better to fill in the holes the lines make between them (see what I mean?) Maybe add more effects like background, to really make the rhythm be part of the experience the ship, it is nice to have a badland style, you can do more with it, you have plenty of black objects and spikes (check my WIP level 3321049 in the first ship part to see what I mean by that) The UFO is good, you could even make it cooler by setting the obj color black WITH BLENDING so the lines are completely invisible. Cloud part is good, but the background blue is ugly That's it After modifs, I'm sure it'll be really great Will rate it demon. or insane
Total attempts: 366 Total jumps 742 Normal 11 Practice 100 Seen that I quit the level several times and retried from the beginning XD
In the ship part the background actually changes with music. P.S. : objects can't have blending, just checked it... Thanks for the feedback tho, i really appreciate it!
